pi & anne

voiceless selves in whiptail Issue 12

Happy to share with you my latest published concrete poem which you can read alongside many fantastic others in whiptail: journal of the single-line poem Issue 12!

whiptail: journal of the single-line poem, Issue 12

Sometimes I write a poem and I doubt someone else will see it like I do. Or see its worth. I’m ever so happy when I find out I’m wrong. A big thank you to the editors Kat Lehmann and Robin Smith ♡

I’m curious, what do YOU see in it? How do YOU read it? What does it mean for you?

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  1. haikutec Avatar
    haikutec

    I see the helplessness of most people’s voices being heard, respected, recognised. Only the glass pane looks back and ‘at us’ and ‘sees’ us.

    Alan

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    1. pi + anne Avatar
      pi + anne

      Wow. YES. You describe what I felt during writing it. And also… the alienation of recognising oneself, the things we hide/are hidden. Sometimes we need to ‘look back’, and therefore look ‘closer’.

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      1. haikutec Avatar
        haikutec

        I do agree. Over decades if I glance or deliberately look at a shop window reflection, for instance, I’m always surprised how different I am, to what I perceive myself to be.

        The same goes to anyone working with me, or close to me. We somehow all look different using a reflective surface instead of looking ‘directly’ at the subject/object, ourselves.

        Alan

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