Oops. I Did It! A Book-long Tanka Sequence.

Nauseating amounts
of cherry blossoms
in my mouth,
I hold my breath
and turn blue.

*

On the verso of
the child moon,
mapping out
apologies . . .

*

Crocuses crocuses crocuses,
this preposterous growth—
a spring
in my autumn
uterus.

—Makoto

It started with a joke in a direct message… 

Why not write a book-length tanka sequence? Why not write a book-length tanka novel? Exactly, why not? There isn’t really any place for truly long sequences in the current journals on the haiku genre, so the answer is to turn it into a book, and that’s exactly what I did.

To be clear: I had no plan. I did what I always do—I wrote when I felt the need to write. Over the course of days, weeks and months, this became a testimony to my life and my feelings, which I found hard to face and hard to bear alone. It was challenging, and at the same time, old acquaintances returned in the form of half-forgotten feelings that made their way into my heart.

Our everyday life is a stream of emotions that float to the surface and sink back down again.

That’s it. Although there is no continuous before and after, no common thread running through it all, it is a story. It is a novel. 

Two motifs appear particularly frequently in Japanese poetry: cherry blossoms and the moon, always a full moon, an autumn moon. One does not decide to write about the moon without being aware that this has perhaps been done too often, that the moon is overused. So one does not write about the moon, right? One does not write about the awakening of buried things in the backyard of one’s life.

Nope. Now more than ever.

That’s how Don’t Write About the Moon was born.

The book will be available soon, still in 2025. I am currently waiting for the proof copy! This time, I had the support of the great R.C. Thomas to make the book a coherent and polished reading experience. (Thank you, Richard. Never again will I publish a book without proper proofreading and editing!)

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  • Would you like to receive the book in advance and write a review? I’d be delighted to send it to you :).
  • Would you like to discuss tanka? I’d be happy to!

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